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　　Howto help Wang Tao

　　Wang Taospent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a goodfriend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s veryimportant for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time onhis study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playingcomputer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So hemust give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he willbecome more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him toconcentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him withall his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find muchfun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachersto help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.

　　【解析】

　　這是一篇給材料作文。王濤沉迷于電腦游戲中，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。作為他的好朋友，要求寫(xiě)一篇短文來(lái)說(shuō)明你你打算怎么幫他。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱主要是第一人稱輔以第三人稱。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意上下文要聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。為了使行文流暢、上下文銜接自然，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要靈活運(yùn)用連接詞或過(guò)渡語(yǔ)言，使文章有一定的連貫性。要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤；要使用自己有把握的句式、單詞，詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

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